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משומה היו כמה דברים ששמתי לב אליהם רק בפעם החמישים שבדקתי את זה... אז הנה הגירסא המתוקנת^_^;:
“Huh?!” cried out a surprised Renji. He had heard about his captains strange sleeping habits before but… he just never thought he himself would receive a close encounter with the VERY strange occurrence. Away in his dream land filled with all the things Byakuya covets, he had no idea he was about the only person in all of Soul Society who was not aware of “The Sixth Division’s Captain’s Sleeping Habits”. He alone did not know of the goofy smile he had smeared all over his face in night time, was not aware of the puckering of his lips, was not aware of the soft whispering of kind, loving, sometimes lustful even words directed at the ears of his beautiful, crimson haired vice captain. Of the later, though, there was another man who didn’t know, the man towards which the spoken words were directed, the beautiful sixth division vice captain, Abarai Renji. Or at least, he didn’t know of that one habit of his captain’s, until about five minutes ago, as he woke up from slumbering near his captain (like a lot of other vice captains do, nothing kinky) to the overwhelming words: “I WUV you Renji-pooh”. I think it very reasonable indeed for our dear vice captain to only be able to mutter that little surprised “huh?!” at hearing these words and seeing that foolish yet handsome expression on his captain’s face, don’t you? Well anyway, back to the story: Byakuya let out a sort of squeaky snore and went back to his unperturbed, calmer than calm sleep leaving his babbled vice captain to his pondering about the situation he was currently in. “Wh-wh-wh-WHAT THE HELL?!?!?!?!” was the next thing out of the mouth which belonged to the man idolized by about 63% of the soul society community. And then, about 10 seconds after the unavoidable shock filled scream, came realization followed by the uncomfortable sensation of heat creeping up his face both for the words of his captain and for the fact that that scream of his had probably woken up at least the residents of the next ten rooms neighboring this one from each side. Bright red now, a thought came to his mind: some sort of twisted joke maybe? But then, the captain was fast asleep, hence it just couldn’t be that. Now Abarai Renji was left to contemplate. He definitely had feelings for Byakuya taicho, but it was hard to digest that the captain would actually have feelings for him too. Maybe it was just another of those strange habits of his, and it just happened to be Renji’s name horribly contorted this night, for all he knew the next sentence of his captain’s could be the beginning of a love serenade towards Kenpachi taicho. And sure enough, in Byakuya’s mind a lovely melody was being played on the piano he was sitting atop. Only, the song was not directed at Kenpachi, nor at anyone but his beloved Renji, it went a little something like this: “OH my dear lovely Re~~~~~nji ♫ There’s no one who loves you more then moa ♪” After hearing that Renji was sure of one thing: his captain was tone deaf. Plus, the song did make him almost certain the one he looked up to and loved all these long years did indeed love him back. And so, seeing his captain’s now puckered and oh so very inviting lips, attached to the handsome and calm face of the sleeping beauty, the vice captain could not refrain from kissing his captain, one Kuchiki Byakuya, who woke up with a start to find almost the exact same scene he had just dreamed about, only to close his eyes again.
