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רונה07

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I write a letter and want to sent it to u,s,a please help me to find my mistake thank you very much!!! the letter: hello dani how are you? how was the flight? I hope it was easy as it can. I send this e-mail beacuse I want to tell you how glad I was to saw you at last week I am sorry about the circumatanes. I was exciting to find out what a wonderful person you are, every word that you said was in the tight place. when you talk to other your words encourage me and sometimes make me laugh. you remind me uncle dobi you look like him, you knew I miss him very much and to my grandfather gabi too, they were good brother and good person, I think about them every day and night. dani take care on your self and your family. please don`t for get me and my family. we love you so much , with god`s help when I get marriage I want you to be my special invite. hope to see you in a good times me this is the letter please correct me soon as you can and I sent it to u.s.a. thank you for the helo 3> דרך אגב אני יודעת על האותיות הקטנות בתחילת מילה במכתב עצמו אקפיד זאת
 

רונה07

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please tell me what you thimk about my english it`s good or I need to read more? what you thimk???
 

orile7

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hello dani how are you? how was the flight? I hope it was easy as it can. I HOPE IT WAS PLEASANT AS POSSIBLE I send this e-mail beacuse I want to tell you how glad I was to saw you at last week I send this e-mail SINCE I WISH to tell you how glad I was SEEING you last week I am sorry about the circumatanes. I am sorry about the CIRCUMSTANCES . I was exciting to find out what a wonderful person you are, every word that you said was in the I was excitED to find out what a wonderful person you are, every word that you'VE said was the tight place. מילים מנחמות=VERY COMFORTING when you talk to other your words encourage me and sometimes make me laugh. you remind when you talk to otherS your words ARE VERY encouragING. and sometimes makeING me laugh. me uncle dobi you look like him, you knew I miss him very much and to my grandfather gabi YOU REMIND ME OF MY UNCLE DOBI. YOU LOOK LIKE HIM. YOU KNOW I MISS HIM VERY MUCH AND ALSO MY GRANDFATHER GABI. too, they were good brother and good person, I think about them every day and night. במשפט זה לא ממש ברור למי את מתכוונת שהיה בן אדם ואח טוב..אם התכוונת שגם הדוד וגם הסבא היו אנשים ואחים טובים אז הנה התרגום: THEY WERE THE BEST BROTHERS AND GREAT PEOPLE. . I THINK ABOUT THEM DAY AND NIGHT. dani take care on your self and your family. DANNY, TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF AND OF YOUR FAMILY please don`t for get me and my family. we love you so much , with god`s help when I get marriage I want you to be my special invite. WITH GOD WILLING, WHEN I GET MARRIED I WISH YOU TO BE MY SPECIAL GUEST.
 
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