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זה יפה, תיקנתי לך ת'שגיאות אם אתה
רוצה, נראה לי שעכשיו זה בסדר It’s the last day now everything's broken No matter what you say it’s still sucks like always You say that you're ok, but you're still going the same way When you go out to have a good time You comeback home and cry all night You never told me why, all I hear from you is a lie Chorus: When you walk next to me And not say a single word, it hurts Do you remember me? I’m the boy that protected you, until you gone (אי אפשר להגיד את זה..אפשר UNTIL U WENT או NOW YOU'RE GONE) You don’t know what is pain You just cause it without a shame I wish I could comeback to the start To say goodbye to you and save the both of us Verse 2:i All I can do is watch you falling (עיף להגי WATCH U FALL, לא פולינג, אבל אז זה לא חרוז..) Without being able to stop your bleeding Why don’t you fall in love, I guess that is your luck You look at the mirror and see Someone who you're not used to be(זה משפט בעייתי, לא יודעת) You always feel ashamed, for who you are today
רוצה, נראה לי שעכשיו זה בסדר It’s the last day now everything's broken No matter what you say it’s still sucks like always You say that you're ok, but you're still going the same way When you go out to have a good time You comeback home and cry all night You never told me why, all I hear from you is a lie Chorus: When you walk next to me And not say a single word, it hurts Do you remember me? I’m the boy that protected you, until you gone (אי אפשר להגיד את זה..אפשר UNTIL U WENT או NOW YOU'RE GONE) You don’t know what is pain You just cause it without a shame I wish I could comeback to the start To say goodbye to you and save the both of us Verse 2:i All I can do is watch you falling (עיף להגי WATCH U FALL, לא פולינג, אבל אז זה לא חרוז..) Without being able to stop your bleeding Why don’t you fall in love, I guess that is your luck You look at the mirror and see Someone who you're not used to be(זה משפט בעייתי, לא יודעת) You always feel ashamed, for who you are today
EnchantedS
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עוד כמה תיקונים
אז כבר העתקתי הכל It’s the last day, now everything's broken No matter what you say, it still sucks like always You say that you're ok, but you're still going the same way When you go out to have a good time You come back home and cry all night You never told me why, all I hear from you is a lie Chorus: When you walk next to me And don't say a single word, it hurts Do you remember me? I’m the boy that protected you, until you were gone (אני חושבת...) You don’t know what pain is (החלפתי את המילים פיין ואיז. זה נכון דיקדוקית אבל הורס את החרוז...) You just cause it without shame I wish I could go back to the start to say goodbye to you and save the both of us Verse 2:i All I can do is watch you fall\ when you're falling (תבחר את אחד מהדרכים...) Without being able to stop your bleeding Why don’t you fall in love, I guess this is your luck You look at the mirror and see Someone you were not used to be You always feel ashamed, for who you are today
אז כבר העתקתי הכל It’s the last day, now everything's broken No matter what you say, it still sucks like always You say that you're ok, but you're still going the same way When you go out to have a good time You come back home and cry all night You never told me why, all I hear from you is a lie Chorus: When you walk next to me And don't say a single word, it hurts Do you remember me? I’m the boy that protected you, until you were gone (אני חושבת...) You don’t know what pain is (החלפתי את המילים פיין ואיז. זה נכון דיקדוקית אבל הורס את החרוז...) You just cause it without shame I wish I could go back to the start to say goodbye to you and save the both of us Verse 2:i All I can do is watch you fall\ when you're falling (תבחר את אחד מהדרכים...) Without being able to stop your bleeding Why don’t you fall in love, I guess this is your luck You look at the mirror and see Someone you were not used to be You always feel ashamed, for who you are today
EnchantedS
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אופס, שכחתי משו
בבית הראשון, שורה אחרונה: You've never told me why (צריך להוסיף הפרזנט פרפקט- 've. ולהבהרה- come back שאתה רצית להגיד, רושמים ב2 מילים, לא מילה אחת, כי במילה אחת זה אומר קאמבק
(יענו כמו שזמר שפרש עושה...)
בבית הראשון, שורה אחרונה: You've never told me why (צריך להוסיף הפרזנט פרפקט- 've. ולהבהרה- come back שאתה רצית להגיד, רושמים ב2 מילים, לא מילה אחת, כי במילה אחת זה אומר קאמבק
(יענו כמו שזמר שפרש עושה...)sappy song
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ואני יודע שיש טעויות בדיקדוק,פשוט לא היה לי כל כך זמן לתקן, תודה למי שהגיב או תיקן
ואני יודע שיש טעויות בדיקדוק,פשוט לא היה לי כל כך זמן לתקן, תודה למי שהגיב או תיקן
הנה שלי אבל אני לא בטוחה שהוא
גמור....צריך לעבוד עליו עוד I hear the footstep next to my door again, I'm shaking…. I hear them whispering, My heart is beating…. Every thing is spinning around, Every thing is breaking down. I can't breathe I'm gasping for air, I try to run away, But my feet are freezing, And I feel that my life is fading. No one can hear my scream, Cause it's just a whisper of my brokering dream.
גמור....צריך לעבוד עליו עוד I hear the footstep next to my door again, I'm shaking…. I hear them whispering, My heart is beating…. Every thing is spinning around, Every thing is breaking down. I can't breathe I'm gasping for air, I try to run away, But my feet are freezing, And I feel that my life is fading. No one can hear my scream, Cause it's just a whisper of my brokering dream.
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