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[ינה הדסטנית]

שיר מדהים../images/Emo13.gif

כישרונית.

 

[Shir FGS]

תודה. ../images/Emo109.gif

 

[סנדרושקה]

יאאא כולם פה כל כך כישרונים!!|חיבוק

 

[female drummer]

אני לא יודעת אם להעלות תיפוף או שיר

מה בא לכם??

 

[קרניjack]

מה שבא לך

תיפוף

 

[kati666]

תיפוף../images/Emo54.gif

אני אוהבת לשמוע תופים

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[EnchantedS]

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[the swan12345678]

טופ נו נשים גם משו שלי

all this time i loved you trying to forget but i cant im thinking why why did you do that? or maybe why not ?! all i want is you why did you left? why did you not here? all i wanted is you the only one the only one who can make all the feeling be as one the only one who can make me smil but now ,now you left and the only one thing i do is to make a wish wish that never come true how can this be? that the only one i love not with me the only one who can make me happy ? i ques that i never be happy thay the happines is not right here in the corner so goodbye my love just remember that you were the only one

 

[EnchantedS]

יפה כמה טעויות קטנטנות:

תיקנתי על השיר: i loved you trying to forget but i cant i'm thinking why why did you do that? or maybe why not ?! (כאן ניראה לי יותר נכון why didn't you, אבל אני לא בטוחה שזו המשמעות שהתכוונת אליה....) all i want is you why did you leave? why aren't you not here? all i wanted is you the only one the only one who can make all the feelings be as one the only one who can make me smile but now ,now you left and the only thing i do is to make a wish a wish that will never come true how can this be? that the only one i love isn't with me the only one who can make me happy ? i guess that i'll never be happy that the happiness is not right here in the corner so goodbye my love just remember that you were the only one

 

[EnchantedS]

אופס, טעות קטנה:

איפה שכתבתי why aren't you not here?, זה אמור להיות או why aren't you here או why are you not here... הראשון עדיף...

 

[קרניjack]

היי יפה!